Joanne Brothwell, author
"Eerie, absorbing tales, edged in myth and lore... a fresh take on the supernatural."
 
I've just been notified by fellow local author, Wes Funk, of an opportunity to do a public reading at Saskatoon's Broadway Street Fair on September 8th. While I know this is a great opportunity for me to meet other authors and get my name "out there", but deep in my gut I feel rather ill at the thought of reading in public.

I've read once before, at McNally Robinson Booksellers during the launch of Love, Loss and Other Oddities by the Saskatchewan Romance Writers. That event was relatively contained, with under 30 people in attendance, and I was just one of seven readers.

This would be different. I'd be standing outside, in front of the historic Victoria School, and possibly reading to... a *audibly swallows* CROWD OF PEOPLE!

I guess I need to suck it up and dive in, head first. To help me in managing my overwhelming stage fright, I'll have to be prepared. Here are a few websites that I'm checking out to help me calm those public speaking jitters:

 
So, fellow bloggers, any suggestions? Do I jump in and go for it? Any tips for coping with t
 
 

As I face returning to work on Tuesday next week, I'm starting to think about how I can maintain the writing momentum I seem to have during holidays.

Last summer holiday I wrote Silencing Breath, the sequel to Stealing Breath. This summer holiday, I wrote 30,000 words and completed my current WIP, The Eve Genome.

What I see when I read other author's blogs, is how everyone I know sets realistic, achievable goals for every day. Every single day.  Geesh. I think I need to lay down. Can you get me a cold cloth?

I think the hardest part of setting daily goals, is balancing it with social media and other marketing efforts. Like right now, as I write this post, I'm checking on my Facebook status, updating my Twitter feed, and responding to three blog interviews.

AND NOW I'm supposed to write, like, every single day?

Yep. I have to. Because I want to set realistic, time-limited, achievable goals. But how do I set realistic, achievable goals that I know I'll follow through on?

 It wasn't easy. What I did do was set out to find some online help in the process. Here are a few great resources that helped me immensely:

1. Duolit - No Excuses: 15-minute Goal Setting For Authors
2. Bob Mayer's Blog - Goal Setting For Writers
3. Writing to Inspire - Writers Goalsetting Tips
4. The Adventurous Writer - 4 Reasons Writers Don't Write
 
Thanks to the suggestions from these fabulous blogs, my goal is realistic, achievable and time-limited. 

I shall write (or revise), every day, for a minimum of 30 minutes.

That's right. Every day. 30 solid minutes.


So, fellow bloggers, how do you set goals? What are they, I'd love to hear!
 
 
After reading author Roni Loren's post on the hazards of using Google Images on your blog, and then getting sued, I realized I was also an offender of using images without permission. Violating copyrite laws is serious, and so I ended up deleting every single post from my old blog, Thoughts Interred in Phrase, plus removing the questionable images from this blog as well.

However, I love to post images. I just think it makes the story more interesting to have a visual to go along with the words. What to do? 

Well, the most obvious, is to use your own images, that you've taken yourself, or that you have purchased. As you can see, I used this article as an excuse to once again post my photo of me with Paul Wesley of The Vampire Diaries! I paid good money for this picture, and damn it, I'm going to use it!

But if you are like me, and have a limited budget for purchased photos, or are limited by the kind of camera you have, you need something more.

So I set out to find some free image sites that require no purchase or permissions. Here are a few of the sites that I'm aware of:

1. PublicDomainImages.net
2. Wikimedia Commons
3. FreeFoto.com
4. Morguefile.com
5. FreeDigitalPhotos.net
6. SXE.net

So, fellow bloggers, do you have any great free photo sites you are aware of that you'd be willing to share?
 
 
Today, as I sit and avoid working on revisions, I'm posting about the importance of authentic dialogue in fiction.

Having completed my science fiction novel (currently without a title), I'm now beginning to go through it with a fine-tooth comb, checking for consistency in character traits and dialogue. 

The hardest thing I've found so far is making sure the dialogue is natural, authentic and accurate for the character. 
The way we speak gives clues to our class, race, education, culture and various other socio-economic or geographic difference. So too, does our characters' dialogue. 

In my novel (I'll call it Mitochondrial Eve, just so it has a title), there is a character who is a brilliant geneticist with a British accent, neither of which I've written before.

As a writer, I stick with "what I know", which is also true for the dialogue. In the past, I've only ever written accents or dialects I was familiar with.  So now, the complication is that I know very few brilliant geneticists with an English accent. In fact, I know none.

So, I've turned to YouTube for help. In Stealing Breath, I used YouTube to do research on the hero, Evan, by I watching reams of videos of a very cute male model (this is the fun part of being a writer!), in order to inspire character quirks, mannerisms, facial expressions, etc. Once again, I'm using YouTube, this time for help with dialogue for my brilliant scientist. 

I've chosen one particular man, who shall remain unnamed, to focus on modelling my character after. Because I am unfamiliar with scientific language, it has been a great learning process to hear this particular scientist speak. 

"Prodigious complexity", "Random Variation", "Propagate the truth", and "Vestigial genes" are just a few of the fabulous new phrases I've picked up from this scientist, thanks to YouTube.

So, fellow bloggers, what do you do to ensure your dialogue is authentic? Do you have any tips or tricks you'd be willing to share?
 

 
 
The first draft of my current WIP is finished! This book is a science fiction/fantasy novel that is in dire need of a new name. 

It was called The Fifth Daughter of Eve up until I attended the Romantic Times Convention in Chicago, where I was told repeatedly by several literary agents, the name needed to change.

So starts the process of naming my baby.

Here are a few titles under consideration:

                                                                                     Mitochondrial Eve
                                                                                       The Eve Project
                                                                                     The Eve Genome


According to lulu.com's titlescorerer,  this is how they break down in terms of likelihood of becoming a Bestseller:

 
                                                                     Mitochondrial Eve 35.9% chance
                                                                         The Eve Project 10.2% chance
                                                                       The Eve Genome  10.2% chance


What do you think? Any of these three stick out, in terms of piquing your interest? Do you have any tips or tricks to help name your books? If you do, please share!
 
 
Even though I'm still on my long (and very protracted) road trip, I still had to do a quick post on the recent leaked photos from the movie adaptation of Cassandra Clare's book, The City of Bones.

The stills are so exciting to me, I can hardly contain myself!
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Jace Wayland (Jamie Campbell Bower) in Shadowhunter gear
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Alec Lightwood (Kevin Zegers) in Shadowhunter gear.
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Clary Fray (Lily Collins)
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Jace (Jamie)
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City of Bones characters: Isabelle, Clary, Jace, and Alec. Squee!
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Clary (Lily Collins) and Simon (Robert Sheehan).
Oh, man! They look sooo cool in their leather Shadowhunter gear, don't you think? Jamie is definitely growing on me as Jace, and I'm loving Kevin as Alec. Of course, Robert is the absolutely perfect Simon.

So, fellow bloggers, any books-to-movie you're excited about? 
 
 
For the next few days, I'll be away from my usual internet shenanigans because I'll be very busy indulging my inner Thelma and Louise on a road trip!

While most of the trip will be rest and leisure, I will also be spending a ton of time in the car, where I expect to finish writing my current WIP,  The Fifth Daughter of Eve. 
 
See you all soon! 

 
 
Come on by the Writer's Digest Blog, Guide to Literary Agents by Chuck Sambuchino today, to see my guest post and enter to win a free copy of Stealing Breath!
 
 
I would like to welcome Lynn Rush, author of Wasteland, Awaited, and Prelude to Darkness to my blog today. Hello Lynn, and welcome!

Lynn's Bio:
Driven to write, Lynn Rush often sees her characters by closing her eyes watching their story unfold in her mind. Lynn Rush is a pen name that is a combination of two sources – Lynn, the first name of her mother-in-law, who passed away and Rush – since the author is a former inline speed skater and mountain biker. All of Rush’s books are dedicated to Lynn, her namesake. 

Rush holds a degree in psychology from Southwest Minnesota State University and a master's degree from the University of Iowa. Originally from Minneapolis, Rush currently enjoys living in the Arizona sunshine by road biking nearly 100 miles per week with her husband of 16 years and jogging with her two loveable Shetland Sheep dogs. 

Check out Lynn's books!



So, Lynn, what is your latest news?

I just submitted a short story for a Christmas anthology. My first, super excited. We’ll see if it gets accepted!

1. How would you describe your writing style?

Intense. I’m told my books are a rush…kind of like my name. And I’d agree. I like to keep things moving, lots of fights, action, and angst. J

2. What is the theme of your novel?

Hope, Faith, and Love. The greatest of these is love. That’s a theme found in ALL of my books. It’s actually my life verse, one I try to live by as closely as I can!

3. What are you reading? Right now I’m editing TAINTED (Book 3 in the Wasteland Trilogy)—but I just finished Fae Dragon: Love Chosen, by Marne Ann Kirk. It was awesome!

4. The cover art of the Wasteland Trilogy is beautiful. Who designed it?

I love my covers. Jeannie Ruesch designed all of my covers for the Wasteland Trilogy. They don’t look like romance novels, but I’m good with that. Brings more intrigue. Not to mention the fact they’re written from the first person, male point of view…so it’s all kinds of exciting!
Quotes and TEASERS from AWAITED:

Durk smiled as if he knew a secret. Well, he did. I was four hundred and thirty-nine years old. Couldn’t really tell Annabelle that, though. But now that I knew she was over the legal age, resting my hands on her hips didn’t feel so wrong.

She stood straight as if the memories flooded back. Her eyes flickered with recognition deeper than sight. It resonated with her soul.

There I sat naked on a plane. No sword. No daggers. No idea what to expect when I landed. I had only the bit of knowledge that I was charged with finding the first female Guardian in over two hundred years. Naked, indeed.

My mind scrambled at her soft finger grazing over me, and I couldn’t get a thought together.

She snatched the paper. I have many scratches. You have none.

“Oh. That. Well…we were lucky.” Lame explanation, but what else was there? Couldn’t very well tell her I was a four-hundred and thirty-nine year-old Guardian. Oh, and by the way, I’d been dreaming of her for three months.

Repeatedly.

I’d hated sitting around the castle these last three months. Save the few small tasks Jessica needed my assistance with, I’d been stuck there. Waiting for an assignment. The training with Durk, Saul and the rest of the Guardians no longer sated my needs. Not since I saw her.

Doubt etched her smooth face. The darkness of realization bloomed in her sapphire eyes. She knew she was going to die.

“Annabelle,” I whispered.

She captured my gaze and held it strong. Her name sounded like beauty personified as it flowed from my mouth. Annabelle. Ma Belle. My beauty.

Annabelle watched with wide eyes as if absorbing every detail of her surroundings. I got the feeling she understood everything. Perceived even more.

She glanced over her shoulder at me and smiled. God, I wished she could talk. I needed to know what went on in her mind.

More importantly, had she dreamed of me, too?

Annabelle looked down at me with smiling eyes. Like from my dreams. Actually, this very moment reminded me of a dream from only two nights before I boarded that fatal flight. Darkness surrounded her, yet her face, no her smile, beamed as if highlighted by the moon above. Strands of hair shifted in the breeze making for a bronzed halo around her illuminated face.

No. This woman was not human. Couldn’t be. No human could possess such beauty. Her gaze shifted down, and she pressed her lips together. Her brows pulled to a vee, creasing her smooth forehead.

She reached out and smoothed some of my unruly hair back, then rested her palm to my cheek. Her mouth moved, but no sound came out, nor could I make out what she tried to say. She turned at the waist and leaned forward, sliding into my arms with a natural ease. Like she knew I’d catch her, had no doubt she belonged where she’d landed.

“Shhh, don’t cry.” I dared to reach for her again, and she captured my hand. She pressed it flush to her warm cheek. Her eyes brimmed with emotion. If only I could read minds. It looked as if she had so much to tell me.

And I wanted to know everything about her. Then, I would find whoever hurt her and end them.

Violently.

I had seventeen hours with Annabelle. Ma Belle. Alone. And hopefully uninterrupted.

Here Durk was worried about having feelings for someone young like Jessica. Belle had only been alive for nineteen years.

Now who was the cradle robber?

She was a feast for my eyes. A dream come to life. She padded forward on bare feet, holding my gaze the entire time. My pulse hammered harder with each step she took.

I started to lean back, but she followed me, nipping at my bottom lip. Her grip on my shoulders tightened as if she held a buoy in a stormy sea.

I’d be that for her.

I held my dream in my hands. Was kissing her. Touching her. Maybe it was true that a plain, old Guardian like myself could find love.

A mate.

Or, I’d fallen into a fantasy world that would leave me burned and in want.

So much pain for a person so young. Whether it was right or wrong, I silently vowed to protect her, love her and care for her. I wasn’t sure what that meant for the Guardian castle, but at this moment, I didn’t care. My goal was to find out what happened to her and fix it. Make it better.

Then make her mine.

“Can I say one last thing, sir?”

“I think you’ve outgrown the sir part, friend. Right when you bested me with the sword.”

He dipped his head. “So, then I can speak frankly?”

“Can’t promise I won’t hit you if I don’t like what I hear, though.”

“Did she say anything about Belle?”

“Nothing other than she would come check her out, which I immediately said no to.”

“Great. We should expect her in a day or two, then.”

Durk whipped his head around. “She wouldn’t dare.” He cursed as realization smacked him in the face. “She’ll do it because I forbade it.”

“You forbade it? And here I thought I was clueless about women. Durk, what were you thinking?”

From the rear view mirror I saw Belle shaking her head. Even she knew. There was no telling a woman, especially one like Jessica Hanks, she couldn’t do something.

Another nod. Her tongue jetted out and wet her lip. She audibly gulped. Blackness ate up her honey eyes as her pupils dilated. I leaned forward, drawn in as if hypnotized. She raised up and met me halfway.

I paused, raining kisses at her throat, wishing they’d coax her voice box into working. I pressed my forehead to hers, working to catch my breath. “Let me hear you, Belle. Talk with me.”

A tear glistened and carved a path over her cheek. What had they done to her that she would choose to be forever silent?

“Thank you.” I held her face between my hands. “Maybe you can get things settled. Are you any good at cooking?”

That earned me a huff. We might be ordering out a lot.

The sense deep within my soul danced its familiar dance, alerting me to the presence of evil.

She squeezed my neck with a strength I hadn’t expected from such a small woman. I petted her hair and made my way out of the closet, thankful to be out of the stuffy, small space. Mostly because I held my treasure.

“The things I do for the Light.” I rammed my fingers through what was left of my hair. “Hundreds of years I’ve had long hair.”

Belle bent over her phone, and in the next second mine scooted across the dresser. Very cute.

I huffed. Four hundred and thirty-nine years old and a nineteen-year-old told me I looked cute and my face heated up like a horny teenager.

I normally liked silence. What guy wouldn’t wish for a woman who didn’t talk much, but I craved her voice. So much. Wanted to hear her talk. Say my name. Something.

“I’m not sure I should stay in here with you, Belle.” In fact, I was sure I shouldn’t. My body was already starting to warm up to the idea of sleeping in the same room—the same bed—with Belle.

“So. Um. Immortal? Like, I’m going to live forever? I mean, as long as I don’t get my head chopped off?” Rain clutched her throat.

“So, um, you’re a Guardian? Super strong and old and unbeatable, right?”

“You got the Guardian and super old part right. But obviously even I can be bested since I was brought here.” I winked at her. “But I know a few tricks. I’ll protect you.”

I leaned over the edge. At least five stories to the grass below. I cast her a quick glance. “Ready to try your first stunt as a Guardian?”

Rain squealed and dropped. I dove at her, but her fingers slid through mine. Her scream trailed after her as she plummeted into the darkness below. The ground shifted below me and in the next breath I, too, was weightless, floating through the air.

Well, this was one way to get down the mountain fast.

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My feet finally found the water’s floor. I tugged the female from Durk’s grasp and hoisted her up into my arms.

The water had washed away the crimson stains, but left her lips thin and blue. Durk pressed his fingers to her neck. “No pulse.”

“Go. Find wood dry enough to burn. We need fire. I’ll start CPR.”

He bolted to his feet and darted away. I settled her on the damp foliage covered floor and ripped her buttoned blouse apart. I rested my ear to her chest. Nothing. Cheek to her mouth. Nothing.

I clamped my hands together and started counting out compressions. “Please. You can’t die. I just found you.”

Her chest caved beneath my weight with each push I offered to start her heart. Pumping it for her. She looked so cold. So small. So fragile. Darkness tainted her lips. I imagined they’d be full and bright red like in my dreams. Her glowing skin was now dull and lifeless.

Please. Michael.

There must have been a reason for me to be on this plane. This time. This date. This instance. Not to let me find someone I’d dreamt about, then to lose her.

I pinched her nose. With my other hand I cradled her neck and opened her mouth to mine. My lips formed a seal around hers, and I blew. Her chest raised. One more breath.

I turned my head, listening. Nothing.

I repeated it for another cycle. Durk returned holding an armful of branches. He ripped open his pack and pulled out a bag.

“Zip lock?”

“Jessica made an appearance at my room while packing.” He held it up. “I thought she’d lost her mind. Matches, magazine, and tiny foil blanket.”

“You didn’t say anything.”

“Told me not to.”

Durk went to work on the fire as I finished the second round of compressions. I leaned down to breathe for her again and paused an inch before contact with her lips. “Please,” I whispered and sealed her mouth with mine.

I breathed into her, then turned and drew in a gulp of air and let it flow into her. A gentle scent of sandalwood and sugar wrapped around me. Coiled me in warmth. The woman flinched beneath me.

Then coughed.

I tilted her to the side and water spewed from her mouth. A tremor rocked her little body. The crackle of a flame, and the scent of burning leaves filled the air. “There you go. Get it out.” I patted her back.

She flopped back and her eyes opened wide.

The same honey irises I’d seen a hundred times in my dreams stared at me. “Can you hear me?”

The lids hung heavy over her dilated eyes, then slid shut.

“No. No. Stay with me.” I patted her shoulder.

Durk joined me, kneeling beside her on the other side. I pressed my finger to her neck.

“She’s got to be in shock. Freezing. Get that fire going.” I peeled my shirt over my head as I stood. “Find all you can to get a small shelter formed around the fire.” I ripped at the belt securing my soggy pants to me. “I’ll warm her up.”

Wasn’t exactly how I’d dreamed I would first lay with a woman, but I’d be damned if I was going to let her die.

She was mine.

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Wasteland (Wasteland, #1) –Available Now
ISBN: 9781937254018
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Book Blurb for Wasteland: 

Salvation comes with a price…

Bound by the blood contract his human mother signed four centuries ago, half-demon, David Sadler, must obey his demonic Master’s order to capture fifteen-year-old Jessica Hanks. But as he learns more about her, he realizes she may be the key to freedom from his demonic enslavement.

The only obstacle—Jessica’s distractingly beautiful Guardian, Rebeka Abbott. He must not give in to their steamy chemistry, or he will lose his humanity. But fresh off a quarter millennia of sensory deprivation as punishment for not retrieving his last target, he may not be able to resist temptation long enough to save what’s left of his human soul.

"A pulse-pounding adrenaline surge brimming with poetic pyrotechnics, Rush’s story caresses your heart. Wasteland is a game-changer in the ho-hum angel/demon world. Beautifully written prose, strong characters and a compelling plot will keep readers hooked until the last page."  --Romantic Times


Awaited (Wasteland, #2) –Now Available
ISBN: 9781937254216
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Book Blurb for Awaited

The voice is a powerful thing. . . 

Russell Leonard is a centuries-old Guardian who’s lost faith in his purpose. So when he’s charged with procuring the first female Guardian in over two centuries, he can only hope it’s the red-headed beauty who’s been haunting his dreams for months. And if it is, he intends to claim her as his. But when he finds his dream woman, Annabelle is mute and bears no Guardian’s Mark.

He soon realizes she’s been tainted by an ancient evil. Russell must somehow release the secrets trapped within this delicate soul to help her tap into the only weapon powerful enough to silence a millennia-old demon--her voice.

“From the first action-packed scene, AWAITED grabs you and doesn't let go until its awesome conclusion.” ~~Caridad Piñeiro, NY Times Best-Selling Author

Prelude to Darkness (Wasteland, # .5) Now Available
ISBN: B00814YWBA 
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 Book blurb for Prelude to Darkness

For a slave, hope is a dangerous thing…

Margaret Rousseau dreams of freedom from a life of servitude. When a mysterious woman saunters into the servants’ tavern promising the impossible, Margaret dares to hope she could win the heart of the one man she has secretly coveted since she first wore a corset... 

The Prince. 

Margaret desperately grasps for the opportunity to change her bleak destiny by placing faith in a woman who is not as forthcoming as she seems. Blinded to the stranger’s dark motives, Margaret surrenders herself to gain her heart’s desires. 

But her choice may bring forth a darkness that could destroy all she holds dear.

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~~~See you in the paranormal~~~ 
Thanks for coming, Lynn! 
 
 
Naming my characters is a fun activity for me, something that I look forward to when developing every story. The problem is, sometimes I can't decide. Sometimes, I pick a name and then realize it's too similar to another character or when it is read on the page it just doesn't look right. 

For example, I recently named my villain Malachi in my current WIP, The Fifth Daughter of Eve. To me, Malachi sounds awesome, but on the page it looks odd. Definitely not menacing.

The other thing I have just discovered is the need to take into consideration what is happening in popular media. Obviously, it is still not yet appropriate to name a 17 year-old character Bella. Maybe in oh, 10 years or so, but not now. 

I just ran into this problem. My main character in TFDoE is named Adriana. It just hit me - what about Anastasia from Fifty Shades? Too similar? Maybe. I definitely don't want to look like I'm trying to mimic another author's character. Especially not this particular character :)

Are you noticing a trend yet? Yep, my WIP, TFDoE has name problems. Well, it probably won't surprise you to hear I am also having trouble with the male lead, too. 

Kalan Kane is the hero in the story, and his twin brother is Haydon (bad guy). To me, it makes perfect sense that these names would be similar, since they're twins. However, when I consider the fact that their names are repeated over and over (3rd person) on the same page, I realize they are actually visually very similar. 

Grrr. Yet another problem with names in TFDoE

Suggestions? What do you do to aid in the naming of characters? Any help would be greatly appreciated!
 

Joanne Brothwell, author